My Poem Neil Armstrong
The ground was harder than metal
My steps were as light as a cloud
I was as slow as a snail walking
It was more brighter than a flashlight
I was more scared than a cat with water
I planted the flag like I would plant plants
This poem was so short it was shorter than the time the flag stayed on the moon.
This task I had write a poem about how would feel I was Neil Armstrong stepping foot on the moon .
Ahiahi Mārie Brendan
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kueni and I am one of blog commenters with the Summer Learning Journey, alongside Eliza. I thought I’d pop over to your blog and check out some of your blog posts.
Kei te pai on such an awesome post today! I really enjoyed reading your poem about how you would feel if you were the first person to land on the moon. I think that Neil Armstrong was such a cool man, he would’ve had some of the best stories about his experience when he stepped foot on the moon.
Your simile poem about how you would feel if you were in Neil Armstrong's shoes is so smart! I especially like the line “my steps were as light as a cloud”, you are so creative!
I know that when Neil Armstrong landed on the moon, he planted an American flag on it. If you were to take something to leave on the moon on your travel, what would you take?
Kueni :)