Wow! I really enjoyed reading your blog post this afternoon of your retold story about Yusra Madrini. I like that you were able to read/watch her story and retell the story in your words, making sure all the important parts of the story were still included.
I think her story is truly amazing, and a very inspirational one too! I see that you have used a similar structure to the one on Yusra’s personal profile, as it helped you when you were trying to write you retold story of what happened.
I think it is cool that she is now training for the 2020 Olympics in Tokyo, will you be tuning in to watch the olympics? If so, what are your favourite events/sports to watch?
Ahiahi Mārie Brendan,
ReplyDeleteWow! I really enjoyed reading your blog post this afternoon of your retold story about Yusra Madrini. I like that you were able to read/watch her story and retell the story in your words, making sure all the important parts of the story were still included.
I think her story is truly amazing, and a very inspirational one too! I see that you have used a similar structure to the one on Yusra’s personal profile, as it helped you when you were trying to write you retold story of what happened.
I think it is cool that she is now training for the 2020 Olympics in Tokyo, will you be tuning in to watch the olympics? If so, what are your favourite events/sports to watch?
Ka kite ano,
Kueni
Hi kueni I guarantee you I'll watch the Olympics . Thank you for commenting on my blog.
ReplyDeleteHave a awesome day!
Blog you later!
Brendan,